“The more passionate and
argumentative I get, the more followers and friends I make online.”
Tasha Turner
The writer thinks that the
friends and followers she makes online are because of her being passionate and
argumentative. When she expresses her ideas and beliefs in a strong way, she
will make more followers and friends because people will think that she is a
courageous person and they will admire to her. I agree with the writer’s opinion
because both in online platforms and in real life, people want to express their
thoughts and opinions freely. However, not all people can do this due to their
shyness, and as a result, they admire those who can reflect their emotions and express
their thoughts with determination. Thus, people want to follow them and be
friends with them. In addition, people are inclined to like and follow tense
arguments in online platforms because these situations encourage them to make comments
about what is argued there, and this increases their self-confidences. Also, they
think that these debates are exciting and entertaining. On the whole, I agree
with the writer’s opinion about social media because people admire those who
can express their opinions with determination and people also like making
comments about something and following
exciting debates in social media.
Dear Tuğba,
YanıtlaSilI really enjoyed reading your reflection. You expressed your opinions in your journal clearly. However, I think you should have made your majors and minors clear by using transitions. You have majors and you support them in your writing, but they are not easy to understand. Your paragraph is well organized. Your ideas are connected to each other. They are related to the topic sentence. I just want to say that you should have used certain transitions to make your majors clearer. I think if you pay attention to this point, your writing will be very good. Thank you for writing it.
Best.